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A Reflection of Life by ~A-Name:iconA-Name:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


Never again shall i swear my life,
For it is too costly to ever be given,
Never again shall i take for granted,
Anything that made me rich or greedy,
Never again shall i know what's right,
For my world is different from any other,
Never again shall i point your direction,
I am not  your compass, i don't know your north,
Never again shall i prey on the weak,
It undermines me, feeble in my den,
Never again shall i argue with you,
You were right, your mind is true.
©2008 ~A-Name
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~Lil-Angelic-Star:iconLil-Angelic-Star: Apr 25, 2008, 9:23:30 AM
Reminds me of a child arguing with their parent and then once time kicks in the child finds out the parent was right from the start.

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You Have To
But You Can't
Or Can You?
~A-Name:iconA-Name: Apr 25, 2008, 9:25:05 AM
lol yeh dats a gd comparison thanks for d comments :)
~elspeth87:iconelspeth87: Apr 25, 2008, 9:30:14 AM
Loving this line in particular: "I am not your compass, i don't know your north". nice
*Planotic:iconPlanotic: Apr 25, 2008, 10:21:32 AM
This is just perfect :D I love it I love it I love it :D

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"A Leon Werth, quand il etait petit garcon."
~A-Name:iconA-Name: Apr 25, 2008, 10:27:31 AM
aww wow thanks v mch :)
~Lil-Angelic-Star:iconLil-Angelic-Star: Apr 25, 2008, 10:51:04 AM
You're very welcome

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:blackrose: Lasair :blackrose:

~Toxic-Threads <--- You Want To Click It
You Have To
But You Can't
Or Can You?
*riencuran:iconriencuran: Apr 25, 2008, 1:30:48 PM
great piece =)

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"These violent delights have violent ends,
And in their triumph die, like fire and powder,
Which, as they kiss, consume."
-Romeo and Juliet

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~loudwisdom:iconloudwisdom: Apr 25, 2008, 2:58:38 PM
well written as always

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Everyone feels a certain way for a reason, when you read a person’s poem you’re glimpsing at their very soul
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